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My heart is falling,
Knees are shaking,
Eyes are wondering,
Mind is crawling,
Back of the line just like always,
No ones cares,
My eyes are bawling,
Life can bring sadness, joy, or pain,
But all i know is that it can stain,
Stain your heart and stain your soul,
Can change your idea of all you know.
this is a poem i wrote and its just the way that i feel about my life.
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:iconannexa:
Wow....that's good. ^ ^ Keep it up, please?
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:iconsleeping-elf:
that's pretty cute :)
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raymanfan Mar 7, 2005
Great, yet sad peom!
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:iconartsychic27:
wow thanx! ive had this one up 4ever! but thanx :hug:
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:iconpunkistuff:
i could'nt have said it better myself, it is just so beutifull, this is so emotional!!! but any way, I :heart: IT!!!!! it is a defantly a +fav:)
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:iconartsychic27:
lol thanxies very much Erin! :glomp:
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Winterfang Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Hey-- really great. I'm impressed. Keep it up.
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:iconartsychic27:
lol thanxies Sydni! and i no ur not impressed easiley! lol :hug:
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Winterfang Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
*chuckles* No. I'm too...me.
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