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My heart is falling,
Knees are shaking,
Eyes are wondering,
Mind is crawling,
Back of the line just like always,
No ones cares,
My eyes are bawling,
Life can bring sadness, joy, or pain,
But all i know is that it can stain,
Stain your heart and stain your soul,
Can change your idea of all you know.
this is a poem i wrote and its just the way that i feel about my life.
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Annexa Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2007
Wow....that's good. ^ ^ Keep it up, please?
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Sleeping-Elf Featured By Owner May 22, 2005
that's pretty cute :)
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner May 22, 2005
uhh thanx you :blush:
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raymanfan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
Great, yet sad peom!
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
wow thanx! ive had this one up 4ever! but thanx :hug:
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punkistuff Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2005
i could'nt have said it better myself, it is just so beutifull, this is so emotional!!! but any way, I :heart: IT!!!!! it is a defantly a +fav:)
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2005
lol thanxies very much Erin! :glomp:
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Winterfang Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Hey-- really great. I'm impressed. Keep it up.
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artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
lol thanxies Sydni! and i no ur not impressed easiley! lol :hug:
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Winterfang Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
*chuckles* No. I'm too...me.
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