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My heart is falling,
Knees are shaking,
Eyes are wondering,
Mind is crawling,
Back of the line just like always,
No ones cares,
My eyes are bawling,
Life can bring sadness, joy, or pain,
But all i know is that it can stain,
Stain your heart and stain your soul,
Can change your idea of all you know.
this is a poem i wrote and its just the way that i feel about my life.
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Annexa Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2007
Wow....that's good. ^ ^ Keep it up, please?
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Sleeping-Elf Featured By Owner May 22, 2005
that's pretty cute :)
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner May 22, 2005
uhh thanx you :blush:
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:iconraymanfan:
raymanfan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
Great, yet sad peom!
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
wow thanx! ive had this one up 4ever! but thanx :hug:
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punkistuff Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2005
i could'nt have said it better myself, it is just so beutifull, this is so emotional!!! but any way, I :heart: IT!!!!! it is a defantly a +fav:)
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2005
lol thanxies very much Erin! :glomp:
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:iconwinterfang:
Winterfang Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Hey-- really great. I'm impressed. Keep it up.
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
lol thanxies Sydni! and i no ur not impressed easiley! lol :hug:
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:iconwinterfang:
Winterfang Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
*chuckles* No. I'm too...me.
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
lol ok then sydni! lol :D
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:iconwinterfang:
Winterfang Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
:fork:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005
lol nice i :heart: it when people stab me in the head with forks lol :hug: u get a hug 4 that :evillaugh: lol
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:iconwinterfang:
Winterfang Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconssejbat:
SSEJBAT Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
TOO TRUE!
:dygel:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
thanx you very much :D
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:iconssejbat:
SSEJBAT Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005
anytime! lol!
:)
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005
lol thanx again....... :hug:
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:iconssejbat:
SSEJBAT Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005
no idea what 4 but hey anytime! lol!
:floating:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2005
lol yay! lol random :hug:
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dancingskelet0n Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
::loves it::
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
thanx you! and hey thanx 4 the fav :hug:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
thanx you! and hey thanx 4 the fav :hug:
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pinkykitty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
very sad but yet very cool!^.~
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
y thanx you! :hug:
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totalenlightenment Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005   Digital Artist
Do yah know what happens when people really like something on this website?
They :+fav: it. lol
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
lol yay! thanx 4 the fav! :hug: lol its really apprecated :D
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totalenlightenment Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005   Digital Artist
and thanky for the hug i really like them, too
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
lol np :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: lol :D
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totalenlightenment Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005   Digital Artist
careful, it is like giving a puppy food he will just keep eating.
one more :hug:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2005
lol yeah i no what u meen! lol :D thanx :hug:
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:icontotalenlightenment:
totalenlightenment Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005   Digital Artist
Bye:!: :hug: :lmao:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2005
BYES!!!
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itaichan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
:clap: YEY!!! I LOVE IT! yup, i have those moments alot...i live those moments...*points to own depressing gallery* great job! :hug:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
lol thanx you very much :hug: yeah i have those moments all the time, there r my life, but thanx 4 ur comments :)
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:iconitaichan:
itaichan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
^^ no problem!
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
:D :hug:
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:iconitaichan:
itaichan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
:glomp: WOO!
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
lol :D i feel so psecail lol *rolls eyes* lol :hug:
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
this is great must :+fav:
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
lol thanx for the fav :hug: lol :D
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deadinside28713 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
your welcome
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
:D :hug: lol
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AbelVox Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
OMG its beautiful....*cries*
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
lol OMG WHAT BEAUTFUL?? lol O_o dont cry! lol .......
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AbelVox Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
your poem silly..lol
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:iconartsychic27:
artsychic27 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
lol ohhh ok thanx! lol i didnt no what u ment at first lol! ^^;
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