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My song

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You opened my soul and touched my heart,
didnt take long for me to fall back apart,
tourcherd by life and my very own soul,
cant understand why I fell in your hole,
your hole filled with happieness, greatness and joy,
it was all fake and im left here destroyed,

Ill try my best to get back on my feet,
can't promase much but i will not be beat,
loved and then lost and now its all gone,
just toke my heart and tore it apart,

I'll be just fine you just wait here and see,
may not seem like it now but i will be,
love lasts forever or so ive been told,
my hope went from smaller to bigger to bold.
ok well i wrote a song and its kinda like a poem! but they didnt have a section to put it under! lol :D so enjoy
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Winterfang's avatar
"tourcherd by life and my very own soul," "tourchered" is tortured

"cant understand why I fell in your hole," can't

"your hole filled with happieness, greatness and joy," greatness,

"it was all fake and im left here destroyed," I'm

"Ill try my best to get back on my feet," I'll

"can't promase much but i will not be beat," promise ; I

"loved and then lost and now its all gone," it's

"just toke my heart and tore it apart," "toke" is took

"love lasts forever or so ive been told," I've